The Beginning of Forever

• Artist: Hannatjuh
• Description: The Epilogue of my first book! This is inspired by Stephanie Meyer's Twilight.
  Please comment because this is almost all I have for now
• Date: 08/01/2008
• Tags: stephaniemeyer twilight newmoon vampire eclipse

I looked into the hunter's eyes, his eyes black with thirst. Knowing that this is my last minute on earth, I waited for him to strike. He would quench his thirst with my blood, after chasing me for weeks. I knew I would die, and I wanted to run, but he was faster of course. Sinking his teeth into my flesh, I felt the burning of the venom in my veins. After that I couldn't remember anything at all.
I was suprised to wake up in a dumpster, my skin was cold, hard and in a puddle, my reflecting image perfect, but my eyes red. The thirst was uncontrollable, and the stray cat that wandered was the victim of it. This was the beginning of forever.

Comments

[monkey_bubbles_1995]

oh that is good!!!!

[queffers10]

my bff is reading that book and its sounds realy kool! anyways, u shouldve posted this under fiction

[nihil interit]

well, first of all, this is not nonfiction
and second, the line: "my skin was cold, hard and in a puddle" needs to be rephrased because it implies that your skin itself was in the puddle apart from your body. Other than that, it's nice.

[Capitan Holland]

kewlness!

[Hannatjuh]

I made a mistake *blushes* Im gonna repost it. thnx

[flamingpie32]

this is really good but why is it in non-fiction