Katie.

• Artist: WomanofWhite
• Description: Katie is the best looking girl at her highschool but she likes a boy no one pays attention to.
• Date: 08/09/2008
• Tags: katie

CHAPTER 1 MY BORING LIFE


It's sunday and as always school awaits.By morning I picked out the cutest outfit possible I could think of. Poptart,backpack,car in that order exactly my sparkling blue bug awaits."Hey Katie." "Hi Katie." Then there he was Marcus Haylings the best painter I'd ever known and most likely ever see. "Hi Marcus I like your hair." "Uh thanks shouldnt the popular table await you." "I figure they can wait." Brrrrrrrrring the bell gosh I was that close.


Drama first,then skipping school,then math ,a summary of my life in one sentencs pathetic I know.
"La,la,la,la,la,la,la." Yay Drama finished,ahh skipping school and getting good grades. Math is so finished..... then getting home that's the hard part.

Fashion!! Rachel and I decided to go to the mall."Okay black skirt with light blue" I asked with anticapation. "Eh oh its cute how about me with the same skirt but with lime green?" "OMG we'd so be able to pull off as twins." Oh god my heart is pumping there he was at the food court."OMG ur looking at the painting kid what's his name anyway?" "Uhmm I was not!" "You were and everyone is so gonna know you like him!"

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I will write Chapter 2 very soon for now rate and comment.

Comments

[SkylarSagia]

Agree with katee09xx. Should be slightly revised, 3/5

[Xx Kiki xxX]

boring bt good story line well done

[katee09xx]

Seems a little rushed. I can't really make out who's talking as you get to the middle of the story. Its a good plot-line though, but i suggest you read other peoples stories and see how they write the dialog, that way you can make the second chapter better.
I'll give it a three :]