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I'm Running, Gasping for air, my heart like a hammer pounding agains my chest, Running out of breath. My body is shutting down, i can not help but to give up as i fall to the depth of my fate. I think, Why me? a 20 year old woman in love with a man who is not of my arranged marriage. My body is jerked from the ground as they tie a rope around my tender wrists and ankles. A sack that smells of blood is placed over my head and i am taken to Hell. I will not live to see him again. It's the first day but it seems like much longer as infection sets in my many wounds on my abused body from the wippings and burns. Why is my father torturing me ? He is dishonoured to the highest extent. He's Raped me from my Freedom. I want to die, yet i long for he who loved me , carressed me and kissed me passionatly on my lips though now i can not possibly remeber the feeling as my heart is full of hurt and pain. How long will they keep me here? It's Dark and all i can hear are taunting voices in my head and the rats that scurry around me as i lay hurting, bleeding, dying. It feels as that not even God can save me from these firey pits of eternal hell. Not even he the only man who showed me the greatest love can save me. One last Gasp, one last silent heart beat, one last glimpse at hell it's self As he, the holy spirit saves me from my dispair as his devout hand reaches out to mine to pull me into the shimmering light. I breathe again , in Heaven where i have snowy white wings and a sparkling flowing gown, my wounds are healed and he is there, my true love, we've escaped from hell.
- by horsebabe04 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/03/2008 |
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- Title: Rejected Alimony
- Artist: horsebabe04
- Description: This is something i wrote last year i based on 2 movies combined that vaugely remember. One was about a girl who just wanted to be with her love but her father was furious that she would not marry the man her parents had arranged that she'd marry. I also combined a few other suspense movies into this.. I love writing and hope you enjoy this little twist of a short story.
- Date: 10/03/2008
- Tags: unjustified love hate evil death
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Sunny Emmerich - 10/03/2008
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i don't really follow the story plot but oddly enough, i like it
but the random capital letters is a bit confusing - Report As Spam
- Wei Hui - 10/03/2008
- The premise is interesting, and it turned out mostly ok but there are some spelling errors here and there and words are capitalized seemingly at random. Besides that, you might want some paragraph breaks because while it is a small wall, it is nonetheless a wall of text.
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- kanyeboy - 10/03/2008
- uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..................ok? iguess.well um i dont know
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