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"What do you want to do now?" a light voice asked with a sigh. She couldn't stand her father's constant desires; he was just like a little kid.
"You are going undercover for me. I have my eye on Kazuma High School.."
"Hey guys!" a petite brown haired girl shouted at her two friends. Her friends turned around, and smiled at their friend.
"Hey Miko! How was your summer?" the tall, blonde haired friend, Haruka, asked. They waited for one of Miko's famous "outbursts", or long replies.
"Well, I visited my grandparents in Japan in late June. We went to the hot springs! That was great, since the water was sowarm! During July, I took part in a fashion summer camp. My designs were in a fashion show! Finally, in early August, I spent my time relaxing. Also..." Miko blushed.
"Tell! Tell!" the friends encouraged in unison.
" Dai and I are going out."
"Woot! Finally! Tell us all the details!" the two friends exclaimed. After an hour of details and talking, they lied down on the hill, watching the multicolored sunset hide behind the ocean.
"I can't believe summer is over," Miko told her friends.
"Yeah, time to go back to boring lectures at Kazuma High School!" the short, brown haired friend, Ayumi, said enthusiastically. The friends giggled. They had an enjoyable summer, but they would have a good time at school together. That was for sure.
As they giggled and talked, a shadow watched them from behind the tree. It smiled, and disappeared.
"Fine, I'll do it."
- by Harajuku_Muse |
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- | Submitted on 12/17/2008 |
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- Title: Prologue- No Secrets
- Artist: Harajuku_Muse
- Description: Ignore my other one, if anyone say it. :P Anyways, this is a story I made up with characters I had. Please only constructive criticism.
- Date: 12/17/2008
- Tags: prologue secrest
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Devonaki - 12/21/2008
- Very good job. The wording is clear and the dialouge is interesting. However you might want to make the plot of your prolouge a little clearer, make it easier to understand. Good job and keep it up!
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