- Once apon a time maybe there still is a little magic in a special valley or place it was the year 303. A little boy walked down a stone path that he never seen befor and wonder in his mind wat it leads two a tons of mist poping in the path. His parents were dead he bearly evean new them Thow His name was Leo Da Vanier? he went down thee path and then he seen........ The valley he stumbled down then he fell screaming No one heard then splash ??? he fell into the valley He got two a part where he could touch the bottem of the Valley. Then somthing swoshed by his leg ??????? He was very very shocked he wondered if it could be can it be a a he studered twice then he said a Mermaid??? wosh it was gone then back so fast ? Faster than a blink of a eye then he said who are u reapetedly then the thing said im a mermaid she had hair like the sun..... Then lights all over shined everywhere the light were called??? Inx's Inx's are half pixie and half fairy some are half mermaid or merman then He knew MAGIC is real so it is called the magical valley!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEE END
- by rainbow fox577 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/22/2008 |
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- Title: The, Magical, Valley , Mist
- Artist: rainbow fox577
- Description: A magical mist from a special and unknown valley.....
- Date: 12/22/2008
- Tags: magical valley mist
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Comments (6 Comments)
- candie57 - 07/29/2010
- no offense but i cant understand any of that.. u put no periods and ur 'to's' were 'two's' the '?' were in the wrong place and u.. sorry but i dont like it.. u spelt practiacally everthing wrong and.. it was just really bad.. 1/5 sorry
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- Young Milliaire - 01/10/2009
- dats was nice
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- Roxas-the-kid - 01/02/2009
- nyu its lovely~
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- l-Sono-San-l - 12/23/2008
- aw that is so cool me <3 it =D
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- wisepanda7 - 12/22/2008
- I <3 it very much!
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- death6evilxx - 12/22/2008
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I like it it is a very nice and createtive story
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