The true story that i made up

• Artist: Master Sash
• Description: hey this story is fiction becuase i made it up. im sorry if anyone has anything in common with this story. i made this up one day in class.
• Date: 01/29/2009
• Tags: true story made

Hey everyone this is one of the true stories that i made up.

Girl- I dont know what to do I think hes cheating on me

Friend- why would you say that

Girl- well he calls me from work and says he has to work late

Friend- ok then mayne he is working late yall have been dateing since you were both freshman in high school

Girl- I know but he has been working alot lately and they just hired a new hot girl at his job

Friend- well thats it then if he calls and cancels on you tonight then you come with me to a party. You know that guy you like from high school is going to be there, o girl and he got finner. So if he is cheating then you get to cheat back its only fair

Girl- ok ill see if he cancels. O wait thats him now ill call you back later.

Friend- ok later.

Boyfriend- hey baby im so sorry im going to have to cancel on you tonight i have to work late again.

Girl- (sadly says) its ok i got othere plans to im going to a party with my friend

Boyfriend- ok have fun but not to much fun and im so sorry honey, i am

Girl- its ok i got to go and get ready for the party tonight (says kind of rudly)

Boyfriend- ok i love you

(girl hangs up and calls friend)

Girl- hey lets go out he caceled again

friend- there you go girl lets go get you some

(the next weekend after the party and the girl cheats)

(the boyfriend takes the girl out to a fancy restaurant)

boyfriend- im sorry i have been working so much baby but ive done it for us

Girl- i know honey and i love you for that but why, why have you been working so much i have everything i need from you. All i want is your love

boyfriend- i know and thats the reason i have been working so much (boyfriend gets down on one knee and says "with this ring i give you my heart soul and my very exitince forever and always will you marry me" wink

Girl- (turns bright red and starts to cry.)

boyfriend- whats wrong honey i thought you wanted to get married thats why i worked so much so i could afford this ring.

THE END

wahmbulance let me know what u thought about the story and what you would have done if you where the girl. would you have told you bf about that one night stand or not. and what would you have done if you where the boyfriend and found out what your gf did what would you have done. wahmbulance

Comments

[Master Sash]

hey EnglishPixie101 the title dosent make sense beacuase its not suposed to lol its just fun. its true beacuse i told it thats what makes it true and its made up beacuse i made it up lol. and yea my grammar sucks sorry. but this is my first story and ill try and do better with the next one but plz i enjoy your comments it lets me know what im doing wrong. thank you

[Held In Focus]

The title doesn't make any sense. It's not true if you made it up, please rephrase. You wrote it more like a script than an actual story. I mean, if you're working on the dialogue between two characters for a story, that's nice, but if you're just posting it like that, it's not a good piece of work. Using chat speak and poor grammar isn't good either. Edit please.

[_Three_Tears_Undead_]

Hmmm, well there was a couple gramatical errors (I am a grammar Nazi) but the stroy its self was ok, the irony was great, but it needed more detail. Another thing you could have added is what the party was like, and made the story longer