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The king stared out of his window, the days events tumbling in his mind. What exactly happened? How did it get like this?
It all started with a boy named Alexander. He lived in Secastealla, claimed by the king to be the perfect city. But Alex found perfection boring.
He had groomed his seahorse Shakespear for the fourteenth time when Mist came into the garden.
"You really need to find something else to do," she told him. Alex put his brush down.
"Like what?" he asked.
"Picnic?"
So they went into the market to get some stuff for the picnic. All the time Alex was telling her about how his life was so boring.
"Maybe you should see the high council," Mist suggested.
"And what will they do about it?" he sneered, "What do they do about anything? All they do is lounge around and look important. I declare a protest!" He started to swim up to the bell tower, a stangely named building that didn't contain a bell, but a long horn. It was into this horn tha Alex shouted, hoping it would amplify his voice. Instead a deafening noise came out. It was a terrible screeching, droning, howling, roaring noise that sounded like the call of a thousand sea creatures. This was followed by two more noises. The first was the king screaming. He was then interrupted by a far more sickening noise. A flying fish fell to the ground at Mist's feet.
- by palkiamaster05 |
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- | Submitted on 02/28/2009 |
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- Title: Quest: Problems in Paradise
- Artist: palkiamaster05
- Description: its about a dude and a dudette who live underwater and haves to go on a quest to fix his mistake that could possibly endanger, like, the whole world. this was part of a project for english and theres another one about a girl called violet saving her futre husband or sometings.
- Date: 02/28/2009
- Tags: questproblems start small
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Jellybean Julie - 03/10/2009
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is there a contuation of this story
cuz im loving it to death
i agree with goddes_of_chaos
there hasnt been very much underwater
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- Goddess_of_Chaos130 - 03/05/2009
- Love it! Very different than what people usually expect in a story. Underwater fictions don't usually happen anymore, do they? Other than some grammatical errors here and there, I think you have a story! I really like it. ^-^
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