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this is a story of a teenage boy and his attempt to find love.
the bell range. all the kids were just getting out of school.a teenage boy was waiting for his girlfriend by the school fence.
he could see her coming from the distance. he waved his hand and said hello. that night they were supposed to go on a date, but fate had other planes. they were walking on the sidewalk when she said they need to talk. the boys eyes started to tear up as she said it was over. she handed him a note. just as he started to cry, and hot tears rolled down his cheeck, a van went screaching out of control, and hit the girl. he rushed over but only to be to late. the van exploded. the paramedics arrived and told him she was dead. he suddenly felt like his heart had been ripped to shreads. he walk in his front door, went into his room and opened the note. " i will always love you" is what it read. he lifted his bed up and grabbed the gun from under it. he slowly brought it under his chin and slowly pulled the trigger. ending his life was the only thing he could do to see her again,to hold her.and tell her that he will always love her too.
- by child manoxide |
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- | Submitted on 03/02/2009 |
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- Title: love is suicide
- Artist: child manoxide
- Description: a tradgece story
- Date: 03/02/2009
- Tags: love suicide
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Bleeding-Black333 - 04/11/2009
- it needs details and a better story line. it makes no sense. you dont tell someone that you will always love them after you've broken up with them..and why would he have a gun under his matress? oh and try to add caps and stuff.
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- Ethomara - 03/20/2009
- It was ok. Good story line but missing a little detail... and capitals. Why would the van explode? Why would she break up with him then say that she loved him. Unless... she planned the van stunt. I don't know just brain storming.
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- Deadly C l i c h e - 03/04/2009
- It doesn't make sense. Sure it's a sad story, but it's just too much of a coincidence that the van hit her and exploded. Please add capitals and punctuate correctly. Don't just keep saying he and she. It gets dull.
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- XxX_Azume_XxX - 03/02/2009
- wow... i like it ,but it's sad sad
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- DoubleEdgeCat - 03/02/2009
- That's... That's just sad... I will always love you, Mike.
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