The Castle in the Shadows

• Artist: The Forgotten Crusader
• Description: Thank you for your comments and ratings. I will continue this story but at the moment I'll have to put it on pause. A lot of stuff is going on at the moment, finals and whatnot. I thank you for your patience. Estimated that late May or early June is when I'll post the second part.
  -The Forgotten Crusader
• Date: 03/17/2009
• Tags: castle shadows vampire occult hellfire

This Piece Has Been Removed.

As an attempt to protect what is mine:
My work.

Crusader apologizes for any inconveniences.

-T.F.C.

Comments

[gothgatewolf]

I really liked your story. Some of your insights are very revealing. One piece of advice, please don't listen to much to criticism. Writers are so very sensitive about their work, and it is so easy to become discouraged. Keep writing, even if it is just for yourself. That piece could very easily be accepted in a sci-fi/horror magazine. I hope I have not overspoken. I really enjoyed your work and hope you keep up with this story!!!

[XVampire_Luv_GurlX]

I read your forum and I agree. Theres not much ways that people come across your stories unless you lead them there. I also read your story and it was great!! It's very detailed and that helps readers picture it out. Im also started writing and I posted my first chapter but I was blown away with your piece. Keep it up!

[Blizpeak]

I think that it's very far along, definitely. But because nothing is ever perfect - writers just make it so darn close - I have a suggestion or two. This might pertain to the setting, but the language of the narrator and the characters is incredibly lofty. And trust your readers to make mental pictures for themselves; you probably don't need so much descriptive detail. Otherwise good work. Rate mine?

[enmortem]

I love it!
Please continue.

[ddao93]

Sugoi! (Amazing!)
I like the story! I love how you wrote with good connotations! Continue with your story! Even if people don't like it, why don't publish it in the real world? It might make it! biggrin

[terminal risk]

Amazing man keep writing

[Nlgger Meats]

continue it its sooooo good!! u have to!!