the man and the knife

• Artist: roukinoko
• Description: some say the ideal of a crimnal is to make your life miserable.well that may be true for we cannot read minds.but do not quickly judge them as such.for a man with a bloody knife may think diffrently.so look beyond that of a knife and look at the person holding it.for if judged you are just makeing another life misreable like the one you bleive is.
• Date: 04/06/2009
• Tags: knife

there was once a man named bob.bob was a peacful man.one day when he was walking he was holding a hunting knife his dad had givin him. then a jacker had come and stole it.pushed bob down on the street.bob fell into a 10-year comma.when bob woke it was 2009.he woke up in a hospital.he had recoverd fully, even his memory.bob remebered the face of the jacker.he looked up faces for ten days till he found him.he got his adress and went to the pawn shop to pick up a knife and a pistol.he went to the adress. the jacker had become rich and was living in a mansion.bob grabbed his weapons and broke the window.he found the mans bedrooom where he slept.he took the knife,and killed him.the jacker opend his eyes to see bob.and his final words were why.bob found him holding a photo.he took it.it showed the jacker and his family.they were poor and lonleyall but him sick.bob then looked at himself in a near bye mirror.he had murderd a orphan birth man. he looked at himself like a monster.he called the police and told them he had killed a man. when they came he took the pistol laughing and shot himself.he could not bear to live as a cold..blood..killer

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Comments

[AmandazzBtfl]

nice job this is deep

[AngelsOfTheDarkSide]

This was good, but it was a little complicated to read. Next time, could you try to put some caps, and switch lines when you change subject?
Thank smile

[Edge Joker]

I totally agree with what you're saying. You shouldn't judge by the outside apperence.