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my life was at a start of something great. a future that offered college a love with the perfect girl and the perfect friend, all that changed when i moved to San Fransisco to start college. problem were there were creepy neighbors ones youd never see at day, ones that were pale ones that look strikingly alike to ancestors of yours. but things turn out weird when you get into a fight with a son of the family drake a Gothic kid with a awkward smile and eyes he beat me hands down but i psst him off so much i didn't even know what he would do. every night i locked my doors like a coward but my life was ruined even if i didnt know it yet. my destined to be wife my family and my close friend all murdered only for the satisfaction of a family of sick and demented people. but what was i going to say, i was the suspect and i had to hide and not be detected the only people who knew where i was were the exact people i didn't want to know. my neighbors found me i thought but no different people found me strangely familiar to them though what was weird though they seemed worse, more evil. a lady came up to me her accent was thick but i easily understood her words she said "stay still" i had no intention to do that but i gave in to her words i couldnt understand it her eyes almost drew i felt like i was losing my self in her eyes. a jolt, a second one my mind was dazed i couldn't do anything i couldnt see anything. one more jolt i had an out of body experience i could see everything now but from a sort of birds or angels perspective it was strange but i felt calm. i saw as my body was beaten and without even knowing it they all were hovering over my body like vultures one screamed this ones mine. she was a young lady her voice sounded so familiar to me but couldnt tell who she was the others left she whispered in my ear i didnt understand what she said but i could feel the coldness of her cheek on my transparent cheek. before i knew blood was seeping out of a wound on my neck made by her teeth seeping right into her mouth i didnt understand i felt whoosy i heard a noise a spiting noise. my body started shaking uncontrollably i was in horrible pain then i felt strange i felt myself going into my body as i heard from the lady say im sorry crying and running away. my life was changed forever
to be continued.....
- by Flush Of Fuchsia |
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- | Submitted on 08/23/2009 |
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- Title: the vamperic change
- Artist: Flush Of Fuchsia
- Description: i hope you like this is first writing ive done on gaia please comment and i am planning on making another one so if you like tell me what should go in the next if its good i just might put it in the next
- Date: 08/23/2009
- Tags: vamperic change outofbody blood love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Cazumi Yamitano - 09/29/2010
- i agree, there are some punctuation marks missing, and if im not mistaken, some words were spelled wrong, but other than that, awesome story. you should make the story longer, or into a book and then post it up in the forums, i bet it would be a great story to read =D
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- Jacqueleem - 09/21/2009
- Hope the kid's life continue ta change fer th betr. Story line's really good, I imagine it'd be helluva story if the punctuations are taken seriously. Ya know, so that readers can have a smooth read. ;p
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- kaylb - 09/08/2009
- ohhhhh. continue continue! i write pices 2!!!! but mine arent half as good as that!
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- Flush Of Fuchsia - 08/23/2009
- thanx for looking
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