Bloody Trails

• Artist: xXxfluffy_panda_bearxXx
• Description: Introduction to a fictional book im writing. hope you like it. please comment as to if you care to read further or if it sucks and i should stop writing it =)
• Date: 07/24/2010
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The sky was pitch black, the air was gray and thick with a misty fog. We held our breaths and waited in the erie silence of the graveyard. Just watching the moon slowly creep across the sky. Every breath we took was shorter and heavier then the one before it and we didn't know which one would be our last. It had been a week since Samantha's "Oh so mysterious death" and I was going to find out what killed her. Regardless of the dangers involved.

Comments

[Kozmotis Pitchiner]

Wow! thats pretty good; i love fiction!! i'm writing a book myself, but i think i'm going to start it over and write in first person...its so much easier and more entertaining to read!! and...hehe....would you mind reading, rating and commenting on my entry Even in Death?

[The-Poison-Muffin]

PLEASE! Send me the book when it's finished, email it to me or message it over Gaia. This sounds incredible! Please, I love reading mystery novels, and ficiton and gore are just another bet that I'll have read them! Please! It's killing me already, this sounds amazing. Even those few sentences just made everything so intriguing!