the girl that is always alone

• Artist: moonlight hidden shadow
• Description: the girl that is always alone
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: randomness girl

The girl that is always alone
she always alone
never speaks
just hoping to be left alone
she walk into the woods every day
morning and night

At school she just sits there
hoping no one will notices her
the teachers have given up on making her speak
she has no friends
the boys try to talk to her as they say
she is the most beautiful girl you will ever see
like an angel

but in her mined
there are dark and disturbing thoughts
thoughts that would never come to any ones mined
your nightmares are her dreams

this girl
she walks in the woods day and night

Comments

[starstarstarrvidore]

So she has a cruel, evil beauty to her. She is far too arrogant to talk to the others, and the teachers, with all their kindness, are driven away by her prideful exterior. Little do they know that she is really a demonic creature from hell who has come here to kill them all.
She walks in the woods to do her dark deeds, cursing the ones who dare question her.

For she is a self-insert.

[shuugamoti]

some pretty crummy comments. communication is more important than spelling and grammar, anyone who makes a deal out of these wasn't meant to hear what you had to say.

[Frisky Shadow]

Epic Failure. Oh, by the way, this is closer to shitty poetry than non-fiction.

[Charlie Loves Apples]

You're just calling yourself beautiful. This poem would have had meaning if you weren't pointing it at yourself. That just makes it fake and stupid and another meaningless poem from another meaningless girl who want attention.

[welabe]

ummm?
i thnk u need to see a tyripst...