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Reflections from Sgt Ted Smout
As his flying palace crashed,
it’s red walls, crimson werewolves
(born in Jericho
and wandering too close to Lycaon’s orchestras)
were ripped apart for souvenirs;
I was there to witness the death
of a demigod.
As a God-fearing Nile
flowed from the crevices
between his purple hills,
one last sound came forth:
Caput!
It was a fitting word;
his voice,
the echo of an aerial earthquake
that once shook the globe’s foundations
and forced thousands into fearful idolization,
finally went silent.
Three digits of burning camels
stood as a silent symbol to his powers.
They lie face down in the dirt, forever unmoving
like twisted worshippers of his three-towered palace.
But as the walls of his castle
crumbled into carcasses of cold, callous steel,
Lycaon-after-Lycaon claimed to have fed him
his immortality
and claimed he was a God only among insects.
While a God among insects, a God he remained.
And while they all fall silent with time,
their purple lips stopping their incessant chatter
and the Lycaon’s finally succeed,
a God will always take more to kill
than a single .303 bullet.
- by knight_of_chivalry |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Reflectionsfrom Sgt. Ted Smout
- Artist: knight_of_chivalry
- Description: I know the title is squished, I apologize. I like long titles. But newho. As the title suggests this is written as though from the perspective of Sgt. Ted Smout, one of the men who witnessed the death of the infamous Red Baron. Hope you enjoy.
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: redbaron baron smout reflections germany
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- TheVoiceOfCreation - 07/16/2008
- 5 stars. <3
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- LittleAshleyKitty - 07/15/2008
- So many allusions! Great job!
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- Aphrodite f l y t r a p - 07/15/2008
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knighty!
Very nice! haha, I do recognize it... wink - Report As Spam
- knight_of_chivalry - 07/15/2008
- <3 you both!
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- Astaire - 07/15/2008
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Knight Man!
You rock my world. heart - Report As Spam
- bohemian_lover_boy - 07/15/2008
- Knight kicks a**. :3 <3
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