The Dreamers and The Doers

• Artist: zakura626
• Description: there are two types of people in the world
• Date: 07/26/2008
• Tags: live dream free zakura

There are the ones that watch
While there are the others that act
While some dream
Some live

Only because they do not need to wish
They have the dream life
The perfect personality
Never needing to wish

Some only live when sleeping
they act what they can't
Always wishing
Always wanting

The the lucky ones
Don't dream
For they are the few brave
They live others dreams
Traveling, acting, sailing, loving
Being free doing as they please

As the others watch
From the side lines
Playing safe
So afraid

So which are you
The dreamers wishing
Or..
The doers being free

Comments

[Ashiyama]

It's not put together very well. I think what you were trying to get across to people is there, but you didn't do too well in putting it into words for me... it could be A LOT better.

[CIeric]

I am the The dreamers wishing, I thought this was a really great poem it tells exactly what I do; whatching on the side lines while I see other people doing everthing I wanted to do.

[Monblanc]

I'm one of the dreamers wishing,
Working to be the doer being.
Very nicely put, it makes total sense, and I can honestly see myself, and some people I know, fit into both categories. 3nodding

[Schizophrenic Angel]

I honestly thought is was sketchy in a few parts, but the meaning beats that all to hell xD. Amazing poem, whoever says otherwise obviously can't dream, or do. I personally am both, a doer who dreams of greater and strives to achieve. I think you might be one too =3