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You left me in the dark of night
To fly past stars at the speed of light
You gave it but a minutes thought
To leave me, my dear astronaut
Your heart had always been up there
You said I’d understand if I had a care
But I must admit, I really did not
I loved you, my dear astronaut
You’re proud to be of a lucky few
And so I wished good luck to you
You said you’d call, guess you forgot
I miss you, my dear astronaut
The problems started after noon
They said you’d be out of good air soon
When you said “I love you” it meant a lot
So goodbye, my dear astronaut
- Title: My Dear Astronaut
- Artist: Ranyel
- Description: When the one you love loves another...
- Date: 09/29/2008
- Tags: astronaut love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- thomlina - 11/14/2009
- thats a great poem
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- Sweet bebe20 - 02/26/2009
- thiis is great and good you are really good at wirting keep it up!!
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- Toastbusters - 09/29/2008
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Fix your iambs, damnit!
Drop and give me fifty trochees, and don't stop 'til I get some decent spondees, goddamnit! - Report As Spam
- Reflections of a Giraffe - 09/29/2008
- I'm sure people who have a boyfriend/husband/whatever in the war could relate to this a lot, even though in this case its an astronaut razz I like it smile 4/5
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