The Ending

• Artist: whitesabers09
• Description:
• Date: 10/10/2008
• Tags: ending

Death is not the end of life.
But, not the ending.
After life there is a new being.
As angles with wings,
Or as angles without their wings (fallen angles)
The sun shows us hope, when
All is lost.
The moon gives us light when, darkness comes, as it
Crosses our darkest memory.
Still, that’s not the ending.
When you give up on live, Love is not ending on you,
But love is, and will always go on without you.
There is no ending,
Only when you want there to
Be an ending.
Death is the end of life. And it is
Not the end, but the being of a new life that’s waiting for you.
All you need to do is keep going.
Even in the after life.

Comments

[Rainbow cat FACE]

death is not the end of life...but...not the end...?
love is not ending...but love is...?
this is really redundant and unclear. it has a good idea, but maybe you should elaborate or choose different words to explain. and the overuse of the verb "is" makes the poem kind of bland.
idk. maybe this is all just going over my head. 3/5

[Eau de Hoe]

I like it!
A few spelling errors, but still good