- flowers is my thing they are colorful shiny and lots of them they are very bonito! go head give me a 1 or 2 as a score but i could not do one a bout a boy i think i love so much its my lyrics i play piano and gutiar! i made my own cd and i sold only about 230!
- by BarbiieByitch |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: flowers
- Artist: BarbiieByitch
- Description: i love flowers but i really love a boy!
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: think love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Mc muffiner - 07/25/2009
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wow im gonna go barf now
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- Rebel Marshmallow - 05/31/2009
- This isn't really much of a poem/lyric...sorry.
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- Piggyzilla - 11/28/2008
- I am sorry, I agree with the others. It is quite awful, indeed. I can't understand what you are trying to convay. Also I think you need to work, a lot, on your spelling, grammer, punctuation, and rythum. Maybe you shouldn't waste your money on the Arena but just as friends/family to look at it.
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- pretty_face4life - 11/27/2008
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I'm sorry, but this is quite awful. Erm, try throwing this out, and completely starting over. Is this actually anything at all??
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- Klaora - 11/27/2008
- My god, that's horrible. Just gonna tell the truth. I can NOT understand a single thing that you are trying to convey. Please use correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, rhythm, and coherent thoughts next time. (If you don't, I do shudder to think of next time.) x.x
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