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You might not always see me, hear me, or sense me,
however, I am always there.
Watching, waiting, for you to finally see me,
to feel me.
When you are playing, or working, I am always close by,
protecting you from dangers all around you,
even dangers you are not aware of.
When you are asleep, I stand by your bed,
making sure that you have good dreams,
not bad.
When you die, I am the one that leads you to heaven,
or hell.
You might be wondering of who I am,
but you already know.
I am your Guardian Angel.
- by I The Ring I |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Guardian Angel
- Artist: I The Ring I
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Description:
I got a detention for this poem, i never got an answer why.
oh well.
i hope you all like it! - Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: guardian angel
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iChemical-kiss - 12/10/2008
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Wicked. o:
You should see some of mine! =D
I realllly like this one thouigh (: Love it - Report As Spam
- kitten11544 - 12/09/2008
- u got detintion because you where not paying attion in class i know i have so many for drawing in class....but its really good.....deitention sucks and im labled as a troubel maker the 3rd day of school lol but pretty good and add me
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- SweetDreamsMyLove - 12/09/2008
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Awesome poem,
Great talent.
Check out mine
The Moment in the new section of the arenas poetry and lyrics
(: - Report As Spam
- Desmotes - 12/09/2008
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At least it flowed fairly well..
But there wasn't any rhyme whatsoever, and to be honest the whole "angel" thing is way too cliche. You pretty much just described what a guardian angel allegedly does, and that in my opinion is somewhat obvious.
Sorry, didn't like it at all. - Report As Spam
- venomous_bride - 12/09/2008
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lol dude this poem was pretty good. but had nothing in it deserving a detention.
i was raised that if you tell someone to go to hell you're cursing but if you just say hell in general, then it's fine. - Report As Spam
- Fire2day - 12/09/2008
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Maybe because of the h word...H**L
considered a bad word over where I live... - Report As Spam