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You might not always see me, hear me, or sense me,
however, I am always there.
Watching, waiting, for you to finally see me,
to feel me.
When you are playing, or working, I am always close by,
protecting you from dangers all around you,
even dangers you are not aware of.
When you are asleep, I stand by your bed,
making sure that you have good dreams,
not bad.
When you die, I am the one that leads you to heaven,
or hell.
You might be wondering of who I am,
but you already know.
I am your Guardian Angel.
- by I The Ring I |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Guardian Angel
- Artist: I The Ring I
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Description:
I got a detention for this poem, i never got an answer why.
oh well.
i hope you all like it! - Date: 11/28/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- prettycaity2 - 12/06/2008
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As what everyone else said.
Some schools don't like student expressing their religion
5/5 I love it Could you tell me what you think of some of my work Plz.
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- scalpel_pleasex - 12/05/2008
- Wow I am the 3rd elf person to say something lol
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- Only Becca - 12/04/2008
- It's because the public school system is afraid of God and religious references. You tried to express your faith and they tried to beat it out of you via punishment. I hope it didn't work. Wonderful job, by the way! 4.5/5 (Not 5/5 because of line 13, which does not flow quite right with the rest of it.)
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- iluvpolkadots - 11/30/2008
- I think, as in some schools, reference to God or Heaven or Hell, is considered offensive. If you demand to know why, and they tell you it was because of that..wait, where do you live? Anyways, I like it.
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- Y u r a l r i a - 11/30/2008
- I think it's true, since I'm christian and people, don't care what happens to them when they pass and this tells them. I seen some of the comments others had left you. It's like they turn a blind eye to this subject. I may be wrong, but that is what I think. I give you a 5
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- Katrika - 11/30/2008
- Maybe they objected to the line about death. But that's silly, it's a great poem! 5/5
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- Nikki4815 - 11/30/2008
- Why in the hell...? You shouldn't have gotten detention for expressing your feelings. They probably gave it to you because they were JEALOUS because this is the best!!! 5/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"
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