No where to go...

• Artist: NickJisoffdachain1994
• Description: I'm a 14 year old girl who skipped school today thinking...I wonder why my life sucks so bad but for some reason im still going through the pain. I might not get good grades but that doesn't mean im not smart. I believe your as smart as how much you understand life. I see the straight "A" student bragging but they really dont I understand. The problem is I understand to much. Haven't you noticed the more smart you'll get, the more depressed. I know the feeling sadly.
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: nowheretogo

I was a pretty little girl when I was four
I always thought about running out the closed door
I never got what i needed i was so poor
It was crazy how much pain i had to endure

I lived life feeling so stuck
I've always felt so fed up
So one day i said this was enough

I packed my stuff and I ran
i never once thought of a plan
i just took off running as fast as i can

As i ran looking back
i knew this wasn't the right track
so i cried as i started to unpack

Even when i was young i wanted to kill myself
I knew there was no where else
i just wanted to be myself

So i sit here thinking where i should go
I swear the clock is going so slow
My hope level is really low
The truth is I will never know

Comments

[Mz_Claus]

I'm staring the clock down
Hoping that you'll come around
Hiding my worry inside
Getting pulled into the tide

Take my hand we'll make it I swear
When i'm with you its like floating on air
Hoping that you'll see this through
Cuz' I don't wanna get over you

Hold me tightly in your arms
Keeping me so safe from harm
Promise me you'll never let go
You have my heart and my soul i luv dis poem

[Tracker Ninja]

Try a rhyme scheme with more than on rhyme per stanza in your next poem

[Nuhaix]

Life isnt always bad time is never completeley sad think of this: We are each of us angels with only one wing and we can only fly by embracing eachother what does this mean to u

[NickJisoffdachain1994]

i know its sad but i write poems to feel better thats how i release stress and pain

[Sunny of Senkai]

The poem itself is marvelous, but I've got to say that it is a bit depressing. I know what you feel and what not, but at the same time, you're only 14, my cousin is the same age as you. Lighten up a bit, the world may be a cruel place to live in, but it all depends on attitude. Attitude is everything! --wise words from the man who gave me the y-chromosomes!

[Freya_Ai]

u have to stop thinking about the bad in ur life and think of the good cuz there r hundreds of ppl going through either the same thing or worse!