if only

• Artist: Aoron
• Description: it's something i just wanted to make. it took me 5 min to make it so it's probably not that good. but tell me what you think. it's a poem fyi
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: love poem

if only if only my love were to be for you and yours to be for me.
if only if only i were as good as you.
if only if only you wern't to good for me.
for you your eyes hair and body are to great to be mine.

if only if only we could stay true
if only if only i could stay with you
if only if only me and your life culd be as one
for you are the most beautiful of them all

if only if only i wish it were true
for you and i could never be one
if only if only i could love you so
for you and i must go

Comments

[I Like to Eat Faces]

Umm even though poetry is abstract its meaning is supposed to break through..
((no offense intended))

[dee32693]

i think it has lots of good things but you ned o re-check it. fix spelling and capitalize the beginning of each line's letter.

[_x_b_r_i_t_t_2_2_x_]

um......................... what?