The perfect dream

• Artist: tarababy21
• Description: I wrote this for my boyfriend. hope you all like it. tell me what you think please!
• Date: 12/16/2008
• Tags: perfect dream

If i could dream the perfect dream,
i''d dream that you were here with me now.
forever and always.
I would dream that we never part.
If i could dream the perfect dream,
I''d dream that there are no heart aches
in this world
and that everything would finally fall in to place.
But most of all i would finally realize that dreams
are just dreams.
And that reality is much better then my dreams
because i know i got you by my side
forever.

Comments

[Meowshy]

I hope you've been dating your boyfriend for quite sometime, if you're dedicating this to him. I think it is okay, but there is a few errors. Despite that, it's pretty decent. =)

[Adrenaline Monkey]

YAY first comment!!
5/5
but ummm you know how you wrote this about your boyfriend? you are going to hate this poem with a passion if he breaks up with you. .