Alone

• Artist: DaT Nigguh ReDD
• Description: A poem that i just wrote of the top of my head
• Date: 05/04/2009
• Tags: alone

Everyone looks like they are having fun
Not to pay a notice to the girl to the side
She doesn't say a word
She never has anyone
Tell her hi or goodbye
She is alone
Alone
Alone without anyone
Alone is a terrible way to be

Comments

[Delilah Daisy Summers]

I think I would've liked it better if you had left it at
"Alone without anyone" - It makes more of an impact than
"Alone is a terrible way to be" ..... Just saying.

[Francesca167]

simple, but pretty smile