thanking of u

• Artist: private punk
• Description: wen and wat i thank of u
• Date: 06/22/2009
• Tags: thanking

Before i sleep i thank of u,
when i sleep i dream of u,
when i awake i thank of u,
dureing the day i thank of ur wonderful smile and bright shineing eyes,
then at the end of the day,wen i thank of ur lauf and about how much i miss u,
a slight tear runs down my face,and once it hits the floor,,,

heart i thank of how much i truly do love u heart

Comments

[Paintwiththewind]

i agree.. way way way too many spelling errors. but its a beautiful peom.

[Skyrim sucks]

Too many spelling errors.

[private punk]

commenting my self

[private punk]

well i thank i did good...