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The Moon For Him
Moon moon shining bright,
Is it true what I think tonight?
As I stare past the shade,
I see the stares like little rays...
Moon moon shining bright,
Is it true? What I see tonight?
The sky, so different,
Yet still the same...
As I gaze out to the night,
Seeing what he see's,
So far away...
Moon moon shining bright,
Is it true what I feel tonight?
This love so deep...yet so new,
So powerful...yet so weak...
Moon moon shining bright
Do I see what he see's tonight?
- by Orgasmic Mooffins |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/08/2009 |
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- Title: The Moon for Him
- Artist: Orgasmic Mooffins
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Description:
this is a poem I just wrote last night, I was staring at the moon, and I thought it up....I'm kinda random like that.....anyways, please DO NOT steal it I did work hard to think of the rest of it....And also please rate high if you like it too (o ~_~) b
this is by me/x.xkitty-catx.x my alter ego.... - Date: 07/08/2009
- Tags: moon love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- BloodSilverStranger - 07/13/2009
- the moon is indeed beautiful and this poem shows just that 5/5
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- AyaneSakura101 - 07/10/2009
- pretty......
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- Hallow16 - 07/09/2009
- A good idea, but poorly executed. (No offense intened, though) By rhyming bright and tonight together in your first line, you establish a Rhyming Pattern, something that you can't stray from. It also has a couple gramatical errors, and spelling. As I said, it's a good thought, just need some work ^.^
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