White Haiku

• Artist: Uncle Marko
• Description: this is not a pun
  an event witnessed by the sun
  haiku made for fun
  
  I hope you enjoy my poems :))
• Date: 09/15/2009
• Tags: white haiku

A beautiful sight
as the playful wind blows with might
I saw it, it's white

there's no time to think
nor is there a moment to blink
cute and frilly pink

you don't have a clue
I'm always thinking about you
elegance of blue

can't help but to frown
you are the new talk in our town
there's a stain of brown *rofl*

Comments

[MalevolentChocolate]

hmm... the second line of each of your paragraphs are a bit too many syllables.

otherwise, good (though i didn't get the last line)

[oxygeNATION]

Haha! Cute!

[Deadlylight6]

the rhythm is 5-7-5 not 5-8-5, but in all these are good