Emotion....... Depressed

• Artist: Micpink5
• Description: Depressed
  The sound people start to repeat
  I make my way through the crowd to fleet
  The scilence I hear comes from the inside
  As I walk on the streets, I feel there is something to hide
  
  I feel a tear dripping down my cheek
  is this really happening in what I am trying to seek?
  Today I lost a friend
  who was close to me
  she only looked on the outside
  the inside, she couldn't see
  
  She has already gone back with her other friends
  so it will be soon our friendship will end
• Date: 02/01/2010
• Tags: emotions friendship sadness awesomlyawesome

its sad crying and its true eek EVERY SINGLE little part of the poem is true! eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek

Comments

[DeCrazySheep]

If you switched the positions on purpose-your a genious. If not, well, it still had a nice pace and rythm, so I'll give it a good mark.

[greatninjayufi]

i like it but shouldn't you switch the description and the poem?