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Life goes on.
Even when the heart is burning
even when it feels like the world has stopped turning
life goes on
Even when you feel like nothing goes right
even when you cry yourself to sleep at night
life goes on
for life doesn't know your sorrows or your woes
life is life
and on it goes.
- by Denna21_free |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/01/2010 |
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- Title: Life goes on
- Artist: Denna21_free
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- Date: 08/01/2010
- Tags: life sorrow woes heart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Goddess SpiritWolf - 11/28/2010
- Very true, even though you think the world has ended, it hasn't cause it keeps living on around you. Very nice ^_^
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- Atalina The Fallen Angel - 09/20/2010
- it is really good but a agree with armygirlspirit, the ending needs to be smoother. i give it a 4/5!
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- armygirlspirit - 08/01/2010
- its a simple format, maybe just work on a smoother ending. good work. i love people who love to improve* check my works out to :3
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- Denna21_free - 08/01/2010
- Please comment, i would love any criticism
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