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The Path Less Traveled

This is a journal/archive. Peices I've written are titled TITLE//PART//version(draft). Feel free to critique my writings via pm. They are appreciated very much.

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Another Tomorrow//Mothers//v.3 Another Tomorrow is my collection of poetry. I write mostly in free verse, so my poems rarely follow any traditional structures (blank verse, hiaku, iambic pentameter ect.). "Mothers" is the earliest poem I wrote that is worth anything. Early work is just a load of crap. Opinions are welcome, as well as critiques. But I highly doubt any critiques will lead to revision. Once I've decided a poem is finished, I rarely edit it. But critiques are welcome so future poems can be better heart Mothers raise and take care of us. They guide and lead us lovingly Early on this journey of life. But our mothers do more than just that. They reach for our hands to guide us, To lead us with love every day. But in the process of reaching, They miss our hands and touch our hearts instead.

Posted by: Fred-the-Cloud Fri Jan 18, 2008 @ 03:37am

Oh yeah? Well I don't like your hamster.
Yup, I pretty much just went there

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