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my thinkings of life and sometime poems in my big head and a chinese story that has gone dead..
PART 9 : AMBUSH!!RUN CHILDERN!!!
"ok come childern"ki hong says "oh something bad is upon us kiwa" he said "father it a ambush"!!!!! said ki hongs dauhter "take the little ones and run!now kimokya!"i said "yes! come chi,ling come on run!!" (two ninja's appear)"you don't have to be scared we just want his dauhter"said one with a slithwery voice "hell no you are no going past us and your never getting my dauhter never hei never"said ki hong "you know these ninja's?" i said confused "yes but not the other one hei is a prince from far away ever since he saw kimokya he wanted her for his wife and queen"ki hong said "yes that is right but you and your little friend are going to die"said hei "shut up bragging hei we got unfished bissness"said sha la ( sha la take my side and attacks)*i hit her leg and she is now down*(hei runs for the kids and kimokya)"ugh let me go you snake"says kimokya "shut up"says hei (he disappears with kimokya) *i slap sha la*"were has he took her!!" "ugh don't slap me again or you won't know"says sha la "ok he has took her took to a the deep amazon forest deep inside there is a temple where he is to be married"sha la says with a smile "and that will be your last smile and last words sha la"says ki hong (is about to cut her in half "NO!!we need to keep her she knows where this amazon forest is!!!" i said "yes ok but if she is lieing she is going to die!!"ki hong says






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Dolly Akezai
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Fri Mar 28, 2008 @ 10:43pm


if you read this tell me how the story should un fold sooo i can make it better than you!!and read the others to!


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