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my thinkings of life and sometime poems in my big head and a chinese story that has gone dead..
PART 16: THE WAR!!!
(23 years later in a great war)"thi take the mage's to the back i will stay here with all the warriors and nija's!!!!"laxara says madly. "but that would surely make us lose!!!"says thi. "no it won't trust me on this thi go NOW!!!"says laxara. "yes laxa"thi says and runs with the mage's. (on the other side of the war)"fight with all you have to the last man and women take prioners if you must but don't lay a finger on queen laxara and leave thi to me!!!!"says shed. *all the demons and soilders roar with their wepons in their hands*."NOW!!"shed says as wave after wave goes to the fighting scene.(on laxara's side)"fight for freedom don't let not one live!!!.and don't lay a finger on clel i will take care of her!!"says laxara ."NOW,NOW,GO!!!!!!!!!!!"says laxara as everything living thing crashes into the enmey. "fire fliers go burn up some meat on the other side!!!"says thi. *the fire flier's lite up on the other soilder's* "good work thi!!"says laxara.(on the other side)"shed leave laxara alone she doesn't want you!!!"says clel. "thats why i am going to kill thi!!"says shed. "but she thinks i am on your side but i am not she is going to kill me!!!"says clel. "oh don't worry she won't kill you....I WILL!!!"says shed and he grab's his sword and stabs clel ".*gurling* you.... monster.....ugh"says clel as she went limp ."now i don't have to worry about big mouth"says shed. *pulls the sword out of clel's throut*. (on the other side)"mage swi how is clel"says laxara concered. "i am sorry queen laxara but clel has been killed by shed"says swi. "ok what were her last words?"says laxara ."umm..."she think's i am on your side she's going to kill me!!!"says swi trying to sound like clel ."ok but her dying words!"says laxar. "umm...*gurling*you...monster....ugh"says swi. "oh she was my last living best friend.....what have i started!"says laxara putting her head in her hands. "you have started a war"says thi from behind laxara "oh thi why..just why"says laxara. (in the battle field laxara's army is winning by 88 percent!!!)(shed is going in to get laxara and kill thi)"laxara!!watch out!!!"says thi he jumps with laxara on to the ground. *shed cuts thi on the back* "AAHHHHH"says thi in pain. "THI!!!NOOO!!!"says laxara. *she checks the wound*"it is very deep will he survive it swi!!!"says laxara. "oh no he won't"says shed coming to get laxara. *he cuts thi again forming a x shape on his back and grabs laxara* ."ugh let me go!!!!!!!THI!!!!"says laxara hitting shed. "laxa.....no....."says thi weakly ."oh i will fix you up but for now the war may be over but we must get queen laxara before she turns into her mother"says till sting while picking up his son.. (meanwhile laxara still is beign carried on shed back on a horse)"i hate you,you give my only love a X scar on his back he may not live to see me again and i might turn into my mother..this is the worst day of my life...."says laxara sadly yet still mad and not hitting shed cause she got tired.. "oh shut up he doesn't desreve you ,i do"says shed. "nope he desrves me with all his heart and you don't need me one bit!!!"says laxara ."ok here we are the araben jungle and palace"says shed putting laxara down on the ground .."i can't belive your not holding me prioner"says laxra. "oh yeah i forgot these...*he slaps on hand cuffs on laxaraa*. "darn i shouldn't of said anything"says laxara dummly.. *shed walks with laxara to the palace and shows her,the room she will be sleeping in*.. *takes the hand cuffs off and pushes her in to the room and lockes the door*.."hey!! let me out!!!"says laxara. "ohhhh thi i wish you were here"laxara says while crying against the door crying






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xxXxEmo_Corgi_PuppiesxXxx
Community Member





Mon Apr 07, 2008 @ 01:56pm


mrgreen thx for comment im ganna write more
and gratz on being my VERY FIRST journal comment
you have a nice story going to it would be nice to see all the parts before part 8 tho
sweatdrop keep up the good work!!


Samsam46
Community Member





Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 10:26pm


sooooooooooooooooooooo sad!!!!!!! crying


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