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As I sit up, up from my bed,
A throbbing pain inside my head.
I drop back down, into my sheets.
This Christmas, I will have no treats.
You see, at school, I caught a cold.
Before a final, my health did fold.
I think I fail'd it, yes siree.
My grade will drop down to a B.
My mom, my dad, and my dear brother.
We all caught sickness, from each other.
I'm the last to become sick.
Please come strike me with a brick.
I won't get well, before that Eve,
when they come together at the tree.
They'll have some cider, and some cake.
This illness is a big mistake!
I want food, and presents, too!
Just more for me, and less for you.
We'd sing some songs, all through the night,
not for the neighbors, but our delight.
I feel quite ill, inside my bed.
With runny nose and hurting head.
I am under so many sheets,
I hope they keep for me some treats.
- Title: Christmas Illness
- Artist: Robohaven
- Description: A discription of how I'm feeling, about being sick when it is close to the holidays. I attempted to make this iambic, and have some rhyme. I didn't use any kind of meter though (I think). D:
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas fever illness seasonal holiday
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Comments (7 Comments)
- newyorker750 - 07/06/2009
- board
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- Invisible Sheldon - 04/03/2009
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love it
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- NoOneyeah - 02/11/2009
- nice ;D
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- Luna Kanamari - 01/28/2009
- Very good! Very cute. 5/5
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- wanderingspirit202 - 01/02/2009
- oh i really like that its really good
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- TohoshinkiForever - 12/29/2008
- That was relly good im gonna rate to a 5 kz laterz
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- Elana_Flourite - 12/16/2008
- oh i love your poem it's so fun =]
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