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When was she going to die? I was stabbing the mother a thousand times, but she still ran away. Still tried to protect her baby. I was a serial killer. Killed eight people. Hell, I was famous! TVs, radios, everything had my name on it. I even killed my own child. I had a taste for that... anyway, she was sweet. Didn't have a care in the world except for her child. When I finally cornered her on the balcony, I finished her. But then that damned kid had to grab my shoelaces. I lost my balance and fell. Man that sucked. I died. But I still killed the kid. He was adopted that time, and I was in a next life. I killed his parents first. Shoved the shower nozzle into her chest. Then the dad. Butchered him.That was fun. I left the older sister alive, just for the surprise. I stole the child back and tortured him. Cut 3 fingers off, burned his chest. Finally I got sick of him and cut his head off. Guess where the head went? On the sister's front porch. I loved hearing her scream. And the best part? They never caught me. I'm just going around everywhere... killing whoever I see. And you're next...
To be continued
- by Crying Angel 264 |
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- | Submitted on 11/08/2008 |
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- Title: Serial Killer
- Artist: Crying Angel 264
- Description: This is just something that I came up with.
- Date: 11/08/2008
- Tags: serial killer
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Comments (6 Comments)
- JackieNinja - 02/11/2009
- the beginning totally sounds like bleach, the little bird that was the spirit of a kid, whos mom was killed on a balcony then the little kid pulled on his shoelaces making him fall off and die... totally copied.
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- Thorn Of The Sky - 01/17/2009
- I liked 5/5 I actually want to read more.5/5
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- SoFiiFii - 11/12/2008
- Write a bit more next time
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- Crying Angel 264 - 11/12/2008
- well it really wasn't supposed to me scary just entertaining
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- HeraWolf - 11/09/2008
- Kinda creepy, and that serial killer has some phycological issues. 5/5
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- KingLes98 - 11/08/2008
- I thought it was trying too hard to be scary but it was okay...
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