Came forth Wicked Reptile

• Artist: Valgee
• Description: Among my first poems. I won't say it's not great because then I'll look like some sad person looking for sympathy, and I won't say its great because I'm not egotistical. Its your opinion not mine, thats why I put it here, I already know my opinion on it. And I won't explain what it means either, thats also for you to interpret.
• Date: 07/29/2008
• Tags: poem reptile lizard poetry

Spewing fire and eyes alight
Make them our savior of fear
Filled filled filled with fright

So says the prophet king
Nevermore will he reign
The bells of Hades then shall ring

If we to be so bold
Oh so ignorant
He to strike thrice-fold

So says the prophet king
Nevermore will he proclaim
The bells of Hades then shall ring

Enjoy the light
Insanity be my guide
For there is neither in the night

So says the prophet king
Nevermore will he murder
The bells of Hades then shall ring

Who but I to rise
To speak against
This madness to my demise

So says the prophet king
Never did he exist
The birds of past sing

Lowly scum of the all
Triumph in our blindness
Lowest never to fall

So says the wicked reptile
Never shunning the lizards of judgement
Fear and patience futile

Comments

[misslovelyness]

I like the illusion and uncertainty you leave. Your meaning isn't entirely clear, and I like that. I also enjoy the metaphors that you seem to have set up. Well done. :]

[Sometimes Flaccid]

If you dont vote 5 your g@y D=

[Slips On Trees xD]

incredible a peom as well a story. 5/5

[laladropDEAD]

thats pretty clever,i havnt seen a story in the form of a poem yet