my self rightious suicide

• Artist: kikiomishi
• Description: this poem.[yes i made it] describes me as a person.and tells how i felt throut my life so far.currenty im feeling really depreesed and sad.but itll get better.
• Date: 08/02/2008
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crying crying crying emo crying
inside im dying
killing myself
never understood
never undertand
the people that look down on me

why cant they hear my silent screams?
why cant they see my broken dreams?
why do they treat me so?
they bruse me
abuse me

but they have also made me strong
i am untoucable
unbreakable
and unbendable

i listen to their yells
and feel their beating
but what they dont kno
is that the pain is fleeting
barly a second
minute
or hour
im sorry to say
i am like this
because they took my inner fire
crushed my beutiful flower

but in thier place they have left
a block of steel
hard and cold
its my protective fold
my fortress that keeps away pain and despair
but im afraid to say
its crumbling
getting weak at the joints
letting in anger
pain
hate and despair
when can i ever be free
of the pain that riddles me.
so im dying
i dont kno how long ill last
i might not get to my grduating class


redface

Comments

[dabigcheese123]

very extroidinary and touching

[bluenica24]

its very touching

[Sweet Little Turtle]

I often feel the same way!!!
But I could never describe it as good as you!!! I liked this poem and it seems so real, you can really dscribe your feelings!!!
Sometimes I think, that you just have to live with it and dont think about it, just live your live, how they want it and you'll never get problems, but it isnt as easy...
so try to get in your own way!!!!!

[peacekitten65]

Wow, that was really really good. I know what your foing through beacuase I'm going through the same thing. But we can't let them get to us. We have to stay strong and proud. If you ever need help with anything, don't be afraid to ask.

[i am ---adrianne---]

sad so raw... so painful

i feel ur pAIN DUDE... i've written somethin like dis b4