WHAT WILL U SAY

• Artist: Keir Yue_blackmoon_
• Description: WHAT IS THAT WORD THE WORD THAT MEANS SO MUCH BUT TO ME IT MEANS NOTHING I CAN TYPE IT BUT I CANT MEAN IT IF I DONT BELIEVE IN IT...
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: will

lOVE NEVER MEANT ANYTHING TO ME IT WAS A WORD IN THE DICTIONARY AND A WORD PEOPLE WOULD SAY ALL THE TIME
I HATE IT BECAUSE A FEW DAYS LATER THEY ARE SAD AND LONELY AND TAKE THE WORD BACK BUT ONCE YOU HAVE SAID IT YOU CANT TAKE IT BACK...
I DONT KNOW WHAT YO DO I LIKE SOMEONE BUT I WANT TO SAY THE OTHER WORD AND THEN I CANT TAKE IT BACK IM SCARED I AM GOING TO TRY TO TELL HIM TOMMARROW DEC. 10, 2008 HOPFULLY HE SAYS IT BACKS AND MEANS IT...
MY HEART IS SAYING YOU DO
BUT MY MIND IS TELLING ME YOU DONT

Comments

[Seltzer Cole]

lol Zlae. Your poem was...eh...needs better formatting.

[Stoned Poet]

I love it

[Mr Clocksy]

dang if the voting hadn't ended, i would've given you a 5 star. it was good. the people below, except foxy roxey, are all stupid, don't listen to them. i put a poem on here once in all caps. not a big deal.

[foxy roxey 132]

u people are harsh cant u look past the mistakes and read the words i thought it was good

[ScarletNguyen]

I'm going to be blunt and very straightforward with what I think. It may seem harsh.
First, you should turn caps off. Second, you have horrible punctuation. Third, your grammar is messed up. Fourth, you misspelled a few things. This is honestly REALLY bad, one of the worst I've read yet. Sorry but yah...this totally sucks. 0/5 stars

[Zlae]

I lol'd. Honestly, I lol'd.

[action3000]

your poem sucks 0/5 so 1/5